It still is a work in progress
Amazing musicianship, very smooth and precise. I love the tone you're getting, sounds like a good telecaster. In the intro, I had a feeling you didn't quite know what you were doing, but that changed the second you broke into the main song. Overall though, it is still a work in progress. It's great as a background, but as a song it doesn't stand on its own. Awesome job with this.